Elevator Pitch No. 1


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  1. UnknownOctober 6, 2017 at 10:18 AM

    That was a great first elevator pitch! I thought that you spoke clearly and at a speed that was very easy to understand because I know sometimes I tend to talk very quickly. I also thought that it was great that you are passionate about the subject, you did say that food has always interested you. The only thing that I think could be corrected, and this is like a me thing, is maybe try to position the camera so part of the couch is not in the shot. I know that can be hard depending on how your room is shaped, but sometimes my eyes would drift in that direction. Other than that, it was an awesome first go! Content, speaking, smiling, everything was really really good!

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  2. UnknownOctober 8, 2017 at 2:44 PM

    Wow that was awesome. You spoke very clear and seemed very passionate about the service of picking up and delivering the leftover food. You could tell that everything you spoke about just flowed smoothly. I believe you have a very genuine and compelling idea, but the grasping pitch could be worked on some. I believe if you were delivering your pitch to someone looking to kickstart a service or product I believe you would have in face convinced them to endorse this service.

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