22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3

I actually found this time to be the most difficult. My favorite elevator pitch to do was the first one because I thought I best explained my cause in that one. I have received mostly positive feedback on all my videos so instead of trying to correct errors, I tried different styles of presenting my pitch. However, I think the first style was the most true to me. This was beneficial because I now know how to present ideas that is most effective for myself.


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  1. UnknownNovember 11, 2017 at 7:30 AM

    I have seen all of your elevator pitches and I have to say, once again, great job. I liked how you decided to change the presentation style of this pitch. I did that too because it think it can help us see which style we like and also if maybe different messages can impact different markets in different ways. Even though you mentioned that this was your most difficult pitch, you still did a fantastic job, the speed, volume level, etc. was consistent and well-executed. I will also say that I agree with you in saying that your first pitch format was my favorite. I think it really captured your idea and gave you a vehicle to display your passion for it.

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  2. UnknownNovember 11, 2017 at 5:10 PM

    The speed and volume of this pitch was very good. I think you did a great job explaining and telling a story which could be a great attention grabber. I did hear a few errors that you made while speaking that could be easily corrected. Your passion for this service is very high and I believe that you could pitch the idea for this better than most anyone today. Good job.

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  3. luke gonzalezNovember 12, 2017 at 1:45 PM

    Im unable to recall your last pitch videos but this one is very good. You are engaged the entire time and get your point across effectively. Maybe one recommendation I would make would be to move around more and engage in more lighting sources throughout the background.

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  4. ShelleyNovember 12, 2017 at 3:28 PM

    This was a good pitch! I liked the incorporation of the story to the beginning. I think that it was a good way to hook the customer. However, I think that you have been more passionate and upbeat in past elevator pitches. I think that the previous ones came off with more excitement which is translated to the viewer. You do a great job though of speaking well and thoroughly.

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